A pickup note works best when it points to the approved photo instead of describing a finished item from memory. Link the order name, the image, and the handoff note so the person packing the item can compare the same reference.
Keep the handoff factual
Record what was approved and what still needs a check. Avoid writing a broad promise about finish, timing, or material performance when the order record only confirms artwork. A short, factual note makes a repeat workflow easier to review without overstating what has been validated.
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